Author: D.R. Ransdell
Book Format: PDF
Obtained: From author in exchange for a fair and honest review
My Rating: 2 Stars
Pages: 236
Published: April 30, 2013 by Dark Oak Mysteries
Synopsis:
Andy Veracruz is content with his life as the leader of a mariachi
band, but when his lover is accused of murder, he has no choice but to defend
her. In the process he faces the loss of his strongest loyalties as well as his
entire career.
Review:
I received a PDF copy of this
book from the author in exchange for a fair and honest review.
Andy is a man in his late 30’s
enjoying his life. Although he has a “girlfriend” he is not yet ready to settle
down and give her the family she wants. At work, where he plays in a Mariachi
band late into the night, the very beautiful Yiolanda, his boss’ wife, catches
his eye more and more.
When his boss, Rolando, asks him
to keep an eye on his wife as he has to attend a family function in Mexico, Andy’s
life takes a turn he could have never seen coming. He begins following her
around, in his boss’ absence, throughout the streets of Squid Bay, CA and into
Las Vegas, NV.
In Yiolanda’s wake of travel
there are three murders and Andy is convinced that it is at her hand. She
continues to claim that she had not been in Nevada, and without actually saying
it, that it was not her that murdered those people. As Yiolanda begins to fear
for her life more and more, she turns to Andy to help save her, and tries to
seduce him as a way of saying “thanks” and to keep him helping.
Andy believes that he has solved
the murders, as all of his leads point directly back at Yiolanda. But, is he
really able to trust his gut that it was her? Or, was it really someone else?
This was really one of those
books, to me at least, that a reader could really tell it was a new author. It
was really a slow and dry beginning. It took about eight chapters for the story
to actually flow and become interesting. Usually, when it takes that long, it
is because the author is using those beginning chapters to character build.
But, that was not the case with this book.
I would have to say that this
book was “alright”. I was able to get through it, but was disappointed that it
was told in the first person. To me, it was also unbelievable that someone
would go through so much to play detective on their own, especially when
dangers presented themselves as they did in the story. Also, there were other
instances where the author changed scenes without warning. For instance, when
Andy first followed Yiolanda to Nevada, he was talking to the wife of one of
the murder victims. At the end of the conversation, the very next sentence, he
was back at his apartment in California. Then the chapter ended.
However, I did feel that, as the
book progressed, and the author caught her groove, that the book became more
interesting and showed signs of being a really good piece of work. It looks as
if this is going to become a series. If so, I am figuring that the stories will
only get better.
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1 comment:
Nice review. I love the gentle let-down.
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